Smile of the unknown girl
My latest post on the kindness of strangers prompted Philippa of The Feisty Blue Gecko to send me one of her wonderful poems this week. Philippa writes:
What a beautiful post – and a truly beautiful gesture. It reminded me so much of a moment in Kathmandu, which struck me so much I re-worked it into the following piece…I love the fact that you shared this experience with us – it is so important to note, value and cherish such meaningful acts of others.
Smile of the unknown girl
Walking through the dusty lane
eyes downward
thoughts of the coming day
keeping me disengaged
detached from my familiar morning track
Step after step
unthinkingly
I move onwards
Something pierces my unseeing vision
catches my attention
brings my consciousness
back to the day around me
Approaching me
a young girl is smiling towards me
is smiling at me
I do not know why
Her gaze is strong
her smile is unbroken
gentle
her expression holds me
as we continue towards each other
We are strangers
so why does she smile?
I do not know why
Perhaps in my distracted state
my shawl has slipped?
An amusing sight
Perhaps she is curious
seeing a white skinned stranger
in this little lane?
Perhaps she would like to befriend
this odd, abstracted,
out of place foreigner?
Nearing each other
our eyes meet
Her mellow gentle smile
spreads across her whole face
lighting up her innocent soft brown eyes
My expression and spirit react,
respond
to her unconditional
kindliness
and in the moment we pass each other
we are both smiling
openly
uninhibited
like old familiar friends
We pass
The moment quickly fading
The sentiment remaining
Onwards
towards the coming day
in a brighter frame of mind
I continue
I still do not know why she smiled so
But it really doesn’t matter

How delightful
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Love this poem..took me far away to another place – very evocative
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Lovely
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Beautiful! Makes me want to go out and smile at a stranger! (Except it is quite late, so maybe that shall wait for tomorrow.) Thank you for this colorful post!
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Thank you for sharing Philippa’s poem, Marie! This is simply stunning; I love it!!
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Thank you so much for sharing this, Marie. I find that there are tiny moments and seemingly small gestures or acts which have incredible meaning, and I was really touched by your own post and the kindness of a stranger.
Thank you for the lovely comments
Philippa
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wonderful wonderful and wonder full.
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Oh, how beautiful! I love the idea that the moment fades but the sentiment remains. What a perfect way to start my day. Now I’m smiling!
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wow… beautiful poem
thumbs up…
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Smiles light up the world. Love this poem!!
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