Poetry Friday
Turquoise
She was once an eleven year old girl
in a long-sleeved and turquoise t-shirt
from the children’s department.
And now she stands before me,
or rather she doesn’t stand before me at all,
she is just a disembodied voice coming to me through the telephone.
I might try to reconcile that voice
with the body of the girl
but the voice is that of a woman, a young woman.
A young intelligent and beautiful woman.
A young intelligent and beautuful woman who has travelled, who is travelling now.
I cannot remember when the voice stopped belonging to the girl and became that of the woman.
I know there is no one moment,
no one precise moment that exists for me to recall,
in which this change suddenly occurred.
I cannot remember how this change came to pass,
but I suppose it must have been a gradual shifting.
I find myself seeing the skins of all the ages between girl and woman
slipping off of her and meeting the floor without a sound.
And so she stands before me now.
Or rather she doesn’t stand before me at all.
And I myself surprisingly full of feeling about the whole thing.
~Darcy~
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I love this – it is so personal and I can really relate to it – especially the line:
I cannot remember when the voice stopped belonging to the girl and became that of the woman
How frighentingly true! Time passes so quickly. One day she is a little toddler clinging to you and next time you look..all grown up.
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A beautiful reflection on the mother daughter relationship and the passing of time.
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I find myself seeing the skins of all the ages between girl and woman
slipping off of her and meeting the floor without a sound.
What amazing lines!
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As the mother of an adored and (for now) adoring little girl, I felt a shiver run down my spine reading this poem as I know this will be true for me one day. It did make me realise how much I need to value this precious time I have now with my daughter while I still can!
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Beautiful!
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Simply stunning. I have just emailed this to my daughter – wonder what she will make of it?! It sums up my own feelings at her growing up too and sometimes catching myself looking at her, wondering where did that sweet little girl in pigtails go to? Not that she isn’t beautiful and wonderful now as a grown up..but ah sometimes my heart aches for the little girl she once was.
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I can certainly understand the sentiments of this poem!
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I am both the daughter and the mother of this poem. I have a little girl now and one of the wonderful things is watching my Mum and her and the wonderful relationship they have now – it’s like my Mum has a chance to recapture all those special moments that she had with me when I was her little girl. It is beautiful to watch.
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I love what Fiona has said – it is like she has given a precious gift back to her mother again – how beautiful
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As the proud grandmother of a beautiful new baby granddaughter I look forward too to being able to recapture some of those special times I spent with my own daughter. As Georgina says, I feel I have been gift a precious gift.
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I am living this right now with my daughter. I run into friends on the street and they say “I can’t believe how grown up your daughter is.”
Sometimes we are so close we don’t see it until it has passed.
This is a great insight into many of our lives.
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Thank you all for your comments and particularly for sharing how it is you relate to the poem.
I’m also very appreciative to Marie for publishing the piece here.
-Darcy
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A really lovely poem, Darcy – thanks for sharing it!
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My daughter, though she didn’t know it, had to drag me kicking and screaming into the “friend” stage of our mother/daughter relationship. Once she did that, I realized that it didn’t diminish my role as a mom to include her as my friend..my best friend, that is. It also opened my eyes to what a wonderful mother she was in her own right.
Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem, Darcy and thank you for posting it, dear one.
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Beautiful comments everyone 🙂
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